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GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Leigh Diffey/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 15:44, 18 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

As promised I'll take a look at Diffey's article. Comments will appear soon. MWright96 (talk) 15:44, 18 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:

Lead

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  • Delink United States, United Kingdom and Australia in the lead prose and infobox per MOS:OVERLINK

Early career: Network Ten and BBC

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  • Wikilink Ipswich Grammar School
  • "He worked alongside Steve Parrish and Suzi Perry." - for whom?
  • "He also covered the 12 Hours of Sebring." When did Diffey cover the Sebring 12 Hours?

2003–2012: Speed Channel and return to Network Ten

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  • Add a link to AMA Motocross Championships

Formula One and IndyCar

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  • Remove the wikilink to SI.com
  • "he called the Belgian Grand Prix from NBC's base in Stamford, Connecticut, before he and Matchett traveled to Pocono Raceway to call the ABC Supply 500." - reptition of "call", also "traveled" must be spelt as travelled since you've put an Australian English tag in the article
  • "Diffey called the Italian Grand Prix in Connecticut and then traveled to" - travelled again

NASCAR

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  • "covering the Xfinity Series at Mid-Ohio Sports Car Course" - The acroymns of the Xfinity Series are needed in parentheses

Global rallycross

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  • "doing play-by-play for the 2017 season's final event" - try round in place of "event"

Overall you've written a fine piece of work Ben. Nothing much from me. MWright96 (talk) 21:05, 18 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

@MWright96: Done everything; the action has been brought! Many thanks, --Bcschneider53 (talk) 02:34, 19 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]
@Bcschneider53: Alright, can now promote to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 08:06, 19 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]