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GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Irruputuncu/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 07:52, 28 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]


General
  • No copyvio/dablink/external link issues
Lead
  • Aymara iru spiny Peruvian feather grass... Potosí Department, Bolivia Is this part mentioned only in the lead? The lead is supposed to be a summary of the main article and not include things excluded from the main article.
  • The mountain is part of the Andean Central Volcanic Zone (CVZ) Separate this out from the rest of the line
Geography and Geology
  • No caps needed for "g" of "Geology" in the title
  • Say "Central Volcanic Zone (CVZ)" at first mention of the phrase (after lead) and try to consistently use "CVZ" throughout afterward
  • Wikilink ignimbrite
  • The oldest lava flows on the northern and eastern...around 0.097 km3 (0.023 cu mi). Source?
  • lateral levees and ogives may sound like jargon
  • Total SO2 flux from Better stick to "sulfur dioxide" for consistency
Eruptive history
  • 5-6 earthquakes per 10 days Endash

Rest looks good to me. Congrats on another beautiful article, and best of luck for your RfA! Cheers, Sainsf (talk · contribs) 14:15, 28 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for the changes. Promoted. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 18:15, 28 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

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